I agree with iamwontallo, but I would just like to correct him/her in the statement that your music can't be used in GD. Because you were approved before the change, your songs work perfectly fine in the system, and so should all your previous and future song :)
I would recommend some better mastering, maybe different snare :P Sounds a bit more like a layout at this point... (A good layout that is)
Change it how you like, send it to me, ill reupload it, ill give you credit.
I really enjoy the song, feels slighlty unclear at times though. Might just be my taste :P
Btw, I noticed in your last song, you didn't know why people couldn't use t in gd, and thats because at Licensing Terms, have have it set on: "You may not use this work without making specific arrangements with the artist." Try putting it in the one where it can freely be used in online games and content (free). Following you hoping for more songs like this XD
Will do! Thanks!
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